六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文及點(diǎn)評(píng)：Tom’s Holiday

 　　Tom’s Holiday

　　Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　寫(xiě)法：這篇習(xí)作是按照地點(diǎn)的順序記敘假期里的活動(dòng)，記敘了假期里去北京做了哪些活動(dòng)以及對(duì)活動(dòng)的感受。

　　時(shí)態(tài)：這篇文章可采用兩種時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)。由于本單元主要講述的是一般過(guò)去時(shí)的用法，所以這里大部分我們采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)比較合適。

　　句型：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式+其他?? 主語(yǔ)+will+動(dòng)詞原形+其他

　　注意：活動(dòng)的相關(guān)表達(dá)法可采用舊知識(shí)和新知識(shí)相結(jié)合去寫(xiě)，但要注意動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的變化規(guī)則。例：eat 的過(guò)去式為ate，為不規(guī)則變化。